So in the previous chapter Commodore Sivaata and Uinkin Hrul returned as players on the stage. The new chapter features an almost all Caldari cast of support characters including a reader favorite. In the end we quickly return to two of our main protagonists and the whole affair becomes a bit more fast paced in it's switches between scenes and characters.
To not make this dialogue and plot development only, I decided to put a bit of spaceship action in there. Everyone likes exploding spaceships, right?
Well maybe Mabrick doesn't. He just builds the weapons others use to destroy ;P
I even went with the times and worked a bit of a hint to the Retribution changes in there from an in-universe perspective. I like to use those little details like getting the colours of the suns in the systems I name right, and placing scenes in the appropriate locations. The real EVE lore geeks will notice that I took one small liberty with a location, but I am sure the majority will not notice.
Can you point it out?
For the next story episode I have something of an experiment in mind. I have basically gone through it in my mind already.
Oh and then there's my friend splatus hinting that he might cross over into my story.
I am curious whether anything comes of that.
Personally I think Lydie could eventually end up in Sandrielle's hands. She is good at picking up damaged goods ;)
Be that as it may ... I was fretting a lot about the oh-so-artificially-significant-because-it's-a-round-number 20th story, but I am beginning to develop a clearer and clearer picture about where it will go, and I am starting to like what I see.
Stay tuned, I'm on a roll.
This is a collection of short in-character fiction pieces about Awakened Industries, a group of capsuleers and their crews living in the enigmatic and dangerous regions of Wormhole Space in EVE Online. None of the protagonists are actual characters or corporations in-game. All similarities with persons fictional or real are possibly coincidental and only sometimes intentional. - Emergent Patroller
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Warning: The stories on this blog contain mature themes involving sexuality and violence and are not suitable for minors or sensitive people.
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